Shattered
It’s a passionate surrender
The face has no name
It fell by the wayside
But a story, just the same
Hiding behind a handsome mask
Dreams that were shattered
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The magnetic field
She travelled
Over two thousand miles
Away
From us . . .
It’s too simple-minded
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The first one
In the midst
Of a quiet
So simple,
but sufficient,
Another day unfolds . . .
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Kurt
09 Jul 2025
Cardinals are incredibly beautiful winged creatures https://www.birdsandblooms.com/birding/bird-photography/photos-of-cardinals/
He Lets Me
He lets me
sleep in
while he heads off to work.
He lets me
try new recipes,
and eats whatever I come up with.
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It's a gorgeous poem that might grab the eyes of readers if configured as suggested below:
It’s a passionate surrender -
The face has no name,
It fell by the wayside.
But a story, just the same
Hiding behind a handsome mask.
Dreams that were shattered
As the hands hit the glass,
It’s a passionate surrender
That face with no name
Reaches back to the sadness
From whence it came
Either way, it's a keeper. If you decide to play with the format a bit you can probably
send it directly to editor@poetspeak.com for possible re-posting